Wednesday, November 17, 2010

The poem of The Metaphor


Thank you,
For teaching me intellects, morals.
Thank you,
For caring about me, and watching me grow.
Thank you,
For the past three years.
You were my the most significant teacher,
No one can instead of you,
Never, ever.
The god took you away,
If I had one chance to meet you again,
I would be grateful,
I would give you a hug;
If I had one chance to talk to you again,
I would be grateful,
I would say,
Thank you!


2 comments:

  1. I think this would be your first poem writing in English and well done! even there are some mistakes.

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  2. I enjoyed reading your poem. I liked your use of repetition for poetic effect.

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